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Crazy friend, maybe needs serious counseling! HELP?
i have a friend at school that acts like she smokes a bong every morning before school. Right now she is at the vending machine... i think she has the munchies. She called my friend an "ebony *****" in her art class. This is unacceptable and is a serious problem. If she sounds like she is on some sort of drug or acid please let me know. She is also a compulsive liar and laughs like a chipmonk on acid.
Thanks.
well ask her whats wrong with her, try to calm her down, and maybe ask others who knows her and try to snap her out of it
Friendship problem - i dont know what to do?
First of all, this is going to be long
i have 2 best buddies. Ebony and Cecelia, however, they are not treating me nice.
About a month ago, Ebony and Cecelia found out my lock combo for my locker by looking over my shoulder. Then, they kept breaking into my locker and saying "Dont leave your valuables in full view Lauren, someone might steal them" and im like "What the hell. you shouldnt be breaking into my locker" I then realized my privacy was at risk and brought a new lock. 2 weeks later, they had re-disvovered the code. And just so you no, at our school, people dont just break into other peoples lockers. It has stopped now though, which is good

Now Ebony keeps being a ***** to me. And that is a SERIOUS UNDERSTATEMENT. It satrted out her being mean to me occaisonally, before escalating. Now, all she says to me is "OMG LAUREN F*CK OFF, nobody likes you" She sometimes even gets Cecelia to be mean to me too. Today we had free dress day and Ebony said "Lauren, you are sooo fat" I AM NOT FAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Im 100 pounds and 14. Of course, i was too polite to mention she had the hole 'muffin top" thing going on. Everytime she says stuff like that i am completely dumbfounded. I want to scream at her, slap her.

I have a few theories as to why she does this
1. A couple of weeks ago i dared her to ask someone out. She did, and got rejected. She blamed me for it. However, things seemed back to normal a few days later (this was back when she was being nice to me)

2. She sees me as a threat. Prehaps she thinks Cecelia will like me more than her.

What the hell do i do
you know better...
Women, what do you think about this? DO you find it true?
Women, what do you think about this? DO you find it true?
www.womanist-musings.com/2010/06/…

Everybody’s been in Kim Kardashian’s mouth. Just as Ray J. stated in a recent television interview, that’s her claim to fame. And Kim Kardashian’s men, Black as they want to be, have to be rich enough to afford her—yet there’s no song on Black American radio that disses and degrades her. To the contrary, she’s written about as though we’ve been descended upon by Elizabeth Taylor.

O.J. Simpson’s famously dead wife, Nicole, was an uneducated “waitress” that he purchased Breast Implants for—then married and put in a five million dollar mansion. But there was never any song castigating her for being a skank and gold digger. Jennifer Lopez rose from a Solid Gold dancer and got all her breaks in life by sleeping with successful Black men who could further her career (Keenan Ivory Wayans, Sean Puffy Combs)…at which point…she took her “stardom created by the Black Community” over to White man Ben Affleck, then to her Puerto Rican husband’s bed; mission accomplished! Kimmora Lee Simmons, a rather pretentious phoney that I “viciously” slapped in the mouth several years ago—supposedly because I’m jealous and bitter about her Cabbage-Patch Face; Bread Box Shaped Body and don’t forget—her spectacularly flat ***, girdle-controlled tummy and butt pad supported photo shopped Ebony magazine layouts—started her gold digging in the African-American community, where she knew her failed Chinese model status would command top dollar. No Black officials greeted her with the words “skank” and no rappers berated her skin complexion or accused her of being a gold digger—as they did the singer Usher’s dark skinned self-employed Black millionaire wife.

Kimmora married Black hip hop Tycoon Russell Simmons, declared herself a “black woman” (as anyone in America can do at will; the Black Americans are ex-slaves and have no standards) and eventually launched a clothing line using Russell’s money he made off the Black Community (purporting this to be a “talent” in Essence Magazine); then after being dumped by Simmons for a more exotic even less Black-looking bombshell; tacked herself onto Djimon Hounsou (who, of course, I’m jealous that she stole from me; sarcasm intended). For this new gig, Kimmora had a baby despite the fact he wasn’t about to marry her—and, in my opinion anyway, dutifully produced the “lighter baby with good hair” as a holiday mascot for his skin-bleaching minions back in Benin, West Africa.

**** Kola Boof! (Oh he will sugar, he will).

Of course—nobody in the “Hip Hop Culture” refers to women like Gary Coleman’s White wife or Kobe Bryant’s video hoochie turned wife—or Kobe Bryant’s “rape accusing” Blond in Colorado with the SPERM of three men on her panties—as “bitches, Ho’s or gold diggers.” Black men just don’t disrespect the White Man’s Mother like that.

A few years ago, Kanye West and Jamie Foxx had a huge hit with a song about Gold diggers. This caused, at last, a music video that focused on beautiful guy-bearing age Black women—the Black Man’s mother. At the end of the song Kanye announced, “I’m going to leave you for a White Woman!” And all of Black America and the White Pop music world laughed, applauded, cheered and drove the song to #1 on the charts—despite the fact that almost none of today’s rich and famous Black men being exploited for their money are getting bilked by Black women.

It was a totally different reaction than Marilyn Monroe, Betty Grable and Lauren Bacall got for starring in the 1950’s gold digging blockbuster “HOW TO MARRY A MILLIONAIRE”—an all blond Hollywood celebration of beautiful women’s right to be paid “at the altar” just for being bombshells. And there’s tons of other films that cheer and celebrate the entitled White gold digger from “GENTLEMEN PREFER BLONDES” to Sigourney Weaver and Jennifer Love Hewitt’s affectionate comedy “GOLD DIGGERS”—to all those celebrated Larry King Live and Anna Nicole Smith tabloid weddings. Amazingly, no one ever writes songs berating these types of women for marrying ugly rich men old enough to be their ancestor.

For beautiful Black women who want to be the rich man’s bombshell wife, however, it’s a whole multitude of double and triple standards.

Thirty years of rap stars, Black, White and Latino have singled out the Black man’s mother as “an innately born gold digger” and “nagging shrew” unworthy of love or respect as a woman. The message on nearly every single CD is that Bitches and Ho’s (which is how the Black Man’s mother is openly referenced on the public radio or at cookouts in the back yards of Black households in the United States) are to be used as sex mules; suitable for freaky sex, preferably discarded afterward and routinely impregnated.

You’re just a punk (according to many in Hip Hop culture) if you even think about taking her to a candle lit dinner or reading poems about her majestic dark shimmering face.
just read it. and it's the truth. unchallenged.

Of course—nobody in the “Hip Hop Culture” refers to women like Gary Coleman’s White wife or Kobe Bryant’s video hoochie turned wife—or Kobe Bryant’s “rape accusing” Blond in Colorado with the SPERM of three men on her panties—as “bitches, Ho’s or gold diggers.” Black men just don’t disrespect the White Man’s Mother like that.


truth, truth, truth. Thankyou Kola Boof- for being real. I dont care about the denial of others at this point.

Just the same how Monica Lewinksky gets a line of purses after screwing around with the President. A black woman would have been a world-class whore in the eyes of ALL of America.

Just like Karen Stephans is nicknamed "super head" while Kendra (renowed ho-bag) gets a husband. a black husband I may add. and Montel Williams marries a tramp he finds in a strip club. wifes her- gives her the lavish life. get out of here with the denial.
My "friend" may not actually be my friend?
My name is Danni and her name is Madeline and we talk everyday and hang out in the morning before school. She always acts like she is having a good time with me, and we get a long really well (and I could tell she wasn't faking). But on a website where you make sets of pictures and text she made a set with pictures of friends on it and she wrote this (she actually wrote it she didnt use a quote) "Laughs" "We aint only friends we are sisters" "Sleep Overs" "Fun Times" "There for each other" "Memories that will last forever" "Care for one another" and "I love you" and below it she has our friends names, Shenae, Ebony, Naomi, Hana, Alyssa and next to each of their names is a <3 but my name isnt there. And theres only two people who arent on the list. Me and a girl she doesn't really like but puts up with and she always bitches about her (even in front of her) and myself...so it's like putting me in the same category with the girl she hates which makes me feel like sh!t.

I have had a depressing life bc of a lot of events that happened and things I couldn't control so I avoided having friends...but Im a different person now and I'm more outgoing and fun to be around and I haven't had a good friend for 5 years, and I thought we were friends...but I guess not...

Do I ask her why my name was not there, or just count my losses and move on? It just feels hopeless every time I think Ive made a friend...I turn out to be wrong and I end up alone.
Don't ask her why - that is too direct and would make you look desperate. If you're only an option in their life, don't treat them like a priority and feel that you are important to them. It's time to move on.
My daughter in law is having an affair with my younger son while she's married to my oldest son. What can I do?
My daughter in law Ebony had me in her corner until I found out this affair she's having with my baby! My son Andre is 20 years old, Ebony is 34. Andre decided not to go to college right away so he stayed home with me and held down a job after graduating high school. Ebony is married to my older son Malik who is currently locked up. He been in prison since 2008 and he's expecting to be released early next year. I can't pretend that Malik has been a total good guy. He put Ebony through a lot. They have a 9 year old son and a 6 year old daughter together. Malik could never hold down no job, he blew his money on weed and he ran his household into debt which made Ebony lose the house last year and have to move into my house along with my grandguys. Through all of that, Ebony did indeed support Malik by writing letters, visiting and keeping his commissary full. She also helped with bills, cooking and cleaning in my house. So, I can't say she sat on her behind and ain't do nothing. Ebony put up with a lot to be with Malik because she loved the sh*t out of him. Ebony is college educated and makes good money and her parents think she can do much better than some delinquent thug. Even though it hurts that they was talking about my son; it's the truth I must admit.

About 7 months ago, Ebony got upset because Malik's jealous, spiteful, ghetto baby momma Lakeisha decided to come to my house and drop off a bunch letters addressed to her from Malik throughout his prison stay. These letters did not say much about the 12 year old son Lakeisha and Malik have together. Malik was saying things like "He misses her", "He still loves her" and "He can't wait to see her". Ebony cried for a long time over that mess. For months I've been consoling Ebony, letting her know that SHE is my daughter and Malik shamed me because I done raised him better than that. I've been cheated on by Malik's father and then Andre's father did the same thing to me, so I felt Ebony's pain. But yesterday afternoon was a nightmare. When I came home from work, my grandguys was playing the Nintendo Wii in the living room. I goes upstairs and hear Ebony moaning from Andre's room. His lock was broken so I busted in and embarrassed both their behinds. They were both naked trying to get dressed. My son barely had his boxers on when I came in. I cursed Ebony out calling her a whore and I had to stop myself from whooping her ***. Long story short, I told her to get her things and get out my house, but my grandguys can stay. But no, Ebony took her things, her guys AND Andre with her to MY DAUGHTER'S house which they'll be staying until they find a place. My daughter is a backstabbing little *****. She never got along with me or Malik so I think she's being spiteful and I'll deal with her later. If she wants to crowd up her house with Andre, Ebony, the guys PLUS the husband and son she already has then that's her irresponsible problem. Andre and Ebony claim to be in love with each other. I can't believe all of this happened under my roof behind my back. To me, this don't make her no better than Malik. I still ain't even told him. Should I tell him? Do you think Ebony was justified in anyway? What in the hell should I do?
Mam, I think you should write a letter to Malik, brag on Ebony, tell him that Andre has stood by your side instead of going to college, etc., etc. Then tell him what has happened, remind him of his need to go straight or else he's going to be right back in jail.

The letter will give him time to cool down, if he's going to cool down at all. But if he walks out of jail thinking he's got a loving wife awaiting, only to learn what has happened there's no telling how he might react.

That's my take on it.

Good luck, you and your family are going to need it.
Boy problems *sigh* help me?
Okay, heres the thing, been talking to this guy for around 8months. He's really nice. Eventually i gained a crush on him, fabulous! But he wont tell me how he feels for me. So when the girl he loved left him he went to pieces three weeks later new girl showed up. In those three weeks, he was getting drunk etc... So great now i guy i rlly like is getting drunk... And then he confessed that he was a player using girls to satisfy them. He didnt want to hurt me he said in the convo with his friend, who then sent it to everyone....
But it was my birthday a few weeks ago, and he wrote a poem for me:
A new day comes as the sun rises
A new day which is full of surprises
This poem being one of them
Written for Phillippa Hampson
People look at you and see a guy
Young and someone who goes through life alone
I look at you and see a woman
Stronger and wiser then any girl I have known
People have called you crazy
Thinking your just a liar
You been critisized so much
But you're still able to put on a smile
That takes mpre strength then anyone I know
That takes more strength then any "adult" has
People who say since you're older they respect you
Those people need to shut up because they're an ***
They should have always respected you
You know you cant deny it because its true
Afterall you have proven yourself over and over again
That you are way more mature then people like Ben :-P
I say I see you as an adult
But you dont believe me and its my fault
Because I wont say how I feel bout you like an idiot
Because I worry what others would sat because of your age like a hypocrite
Why do you believe lies that you told yourself?
Why cant you ever see?
Why cant I ever be truthful
About how much you really mean to me?
But since there isnt much to really say
Ebony... Happy birthday :)
Now wouldn't you want answers if a guy wrote that for your birthday?
And now the new girl who showed up, who, when he was drunk... Had cyber sex... So now shes here, shes acting like a totaly ***** to me and one of my best friends and another friend because we are a threat to her and AJ and my best friend for life is like best buds with her... How AWKWARD!?
so this is my question... What do you do now... I want to stick my finger up at they guy, kill his girlfriend and storm off into the sunset... But thats not right... Tell me what you think of this situaton and please give me advice...
And please no party crashers :P
calmly talk to them and talk to the guy and u can work something out like if anything happens just go separate ways but still be friends something like that
What do you think of these lyrics?
Its my own ***** Please called ***** Please III the beats going to be a little different tho

Chorus: 2x
Everyone wants to be the best
End up getting a bullet to the chest
Let you bitches rest in peace
**** YOU ***** WANNA LITTLE PIECE


Verse 1
1Let me introduce yall to Southern Bob munching this track like corn on the cob/
2Slitting throats and wrist like it was my job come up to ya like there was something to rob/
3Something to take from yo fake *** and flash it in front of ya face that ****’s a piece of cake/
4Mr.Serious and Memphis Ink don’t think I have what it takes to make a good impression/
5Thats why they usually rock the shows while my mic’s still in test for check wait a second/
6Who the **** you think you dealing with you betta check who ya dealing with/
7Coming from the east and west of Memphis and Adams Tennessee the new Eminem/
8Are ya feeling me with all this jack bean and Hennessey there aint no offense to me/
9Too serious for me to joke around and make fun of now looks whose the top gunna/
10Lead drummer drumming your heads like I was from Virginia tech THE UNDEAD SECT(ESJ screams that)/
11Oh did I cross the line **** YOU ***** they crossed the line when they toiled in his mind/
12Don’t cry or act surprised any of the bullies got shot they deserve to die and I think that’s fine/

Chorus 2x

Verse 2
13And whats wrong with s b o b I aint no Ebeneze I love the ebonies/
14Not so much ivories but what I love the most is Tori getting down on her knees/
15Begging for my banana (say in girly voice) pweez (Mr. Serious says: **** you *****)
16Fuck you too Serious seriously don’t believe a single bigoted word they breathe/
17Can’t you see I’m no disease cuz appearances deceive/
18Rob-3 not even close to shady he’s not crazy he’s just insane and the brain is hazy/
20Gray hairy and lazy like grand pas balls but people can turn around and I’m the batman to call/
21And just cuz I’m a white rapper doesn’t mean I’m a juggalo but ill go with ICP to cut throats/
22Boast with Jamie that I cut the rope on your dangling guys then hand you some dope to cope/
23Metal and crunk with a lemon twist of punk bumping a ghetto sound system in the trunk/
24Along with ESJ’s insane brain in my lap telekinesis beats for me to rap/
25Wait hold up don’t tell him I said that its a surprise

Chorus 2x

Verse 3
26Oh Southern bob why you being so harsh saying you slanging body parts/
27WTF is wrong with you don’t you have a heart(5 seconds of silence)no/
28Hoe growing up I was like the pie in the stove that got burnt dried out soul/
29Rob-3 never wanted to develop me its all accidentally but this aint no accident to me/
30You can say I was never meant to be but Robbie not Rob-3 used to pussy befo me/
31Unlike alotta people I refuse to be used and abused like some ***** *** prostitute/
32If Ink and Serious would let me I’d be the one to cruise on a school popping grapes fool/
33(Yell in an angry voice) What I was annoying not so cool I aint no white trash tool/
34I’m killing em all doesn’t matter if yall are white or black I’m still gonna attack/
35Doesn’t matter if ya broke or gotta lot stacks and down with a gang or got some mac/
36Pop a fatty use his meat for my job at mc-e-dees for my big macs/
37Secret recipe nice and brown like Chavez’s skin oh **** did I say that again/
38I’m sorry Chavez looks like I’ve killed again major sin/
39Well I’m going to hell anyways might as well do it with a grin/

Chorus 2x
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My Snow White story retelling.Thoughts? Sucks?
Once upon a time, there were seven dwarfs – Bashful, Doc, Dopey, Grumpy, Happy, Sleepy and Sneezy – a beautiful princess who had skin as white as snow, lips as red as blood, and hair as black as ebony.
Every morning the dwarfs went into the mountains mining for gold, and in the evening they came back home when the bell sounded at exactly six o’clock.
“Time to go home to the *****,” Grumpy grunted.
“Don’t call her that.” Bashful blushed red.
“Don’t be such a doormat, Bashful,” Dopey growled.
“Shall we sing ‘Hi hoe, we’re home’?” Happy grunted.
“Nope,” Sneezy said, “Remember the last time we sang that?” They were all shut quiet and made their way home slowly.
**
Hundreds of miles away lived an evil queen. She had studied dark magic and acquired a magic mirror. She stood before it, gazing at her speciously beautiful appearance. “Mirror, mirror on the wall, who’s the evilest of them all?” She eagerly awaited the mirror to speak her name.
“Snow White,” it said.
“Why, thank you…Wait, what’d you mean, ‘Snow White’?” she yelled at the mirror. “She can’t possibly be the evilest!”
“She is.”
“Absurd!” shouted the queen.
“It’s true.”
“What the hell, can’t you speak more than two words at a time?” the queen snapped.
“No, ma’am.”
“Well, fine then. How do I become the evilest?” she asked.
“Kill her.”
“Kill who?” asked the queen.
“Are you daft, woman? Snow White!” the mirror snapped.
“That was more than two words,” the queen pointed out.
“Screw you,” said the mirror.
“Well, how do I kill her?” the queen asked.
“Her slaves.”
“Slaves?”
“Yes, seven.”
“Seven slaves,” the queen pondered, “You think they’ll help me?”
“Most definitely.”
“Good, good,” she exclaimed in delight. “Then by the end of the week, I’ll be the evilest! Muahhahaha!” Her evil laughter echoed in the skies.
**
“We’re home,” Sleepy said.
“Don’t take that tone with me, Lazy!” Snow White snapped. “It’s going to get dirty! Duckface, Dipshit, Creepy, Alakazam, come pick it up!” she yelled. Doc, Dopey, Happy and Sneezy all flinched at their crude nicknames, and grudgingly hurried forward to lift the hem of Snow White’s dress off the floor.” As for the rest of you, clean up this pig sty. It’s a mess.”
Sneezy bent double in a sneeze, letting Snow White’s dress fall to the floor. “Alakazam!” she snapped, “My dress is touching the floor.” He scrambled to pick it up. “Led me to the bedroom, I’m tired by the day and need my rest.” They walked her to her bedroom. “I expect to wake up to a clean house!” Before slamming the door in their faces, she added, “Or no food.”
So they began their work. Late that night, when Sleepy’s eyes started to drop of their own accord, the dwarfs were interrupted from their cleaning by a knock on the door.
“I’ll get it,” Doc said, laying down his broom.
“Why do you get to get it?” Grumpy asked grumpily.
“Because I’m closest to the door,” Doc snapped back. He pulled open the door, and gasped.
“What is it?” Happy asked.
“I’m not a What,” said the evil queen.
Bashful took in a big breath, “Huh, the evil queen? Holy!” he pushed past her out the door and did not stop running. The other six dwarfs watched him run away with raised eyebrows.
“It was bound to happen,” Grumpy grunted, “He really was a doormat.” The others nodded fervently. “Anyways, what do you want?” he asked the queen.
“I want to kill Snow White,” she answered simply.
All the dwarfs dropped their brooms. “Really?” they all asked at once. “Her bedroom’s that way,” the six dwarfs pointed simultaneously.
“Tempting,” the queen said, eyeing Snow White’s bedroom door, “But I’ve devised a better plan. Give her this apple.” The queen held out a red apple. “I have poisoned it. Am I not the evilest person in the world?”
“That’s bound to fail,” Grumpy said.
“That’s what she said,” Sneezy added.
“Seriously, her bedroom’s right here and she’s asleep and helpless. Why don’t you just plunge a knife into her heart?” Doc asked.
“I am the evil genius!” The queen stomped her foot. “What I say goes.”
“Alright,” Happy said.
“But we warned you,” Doc said.
“Just give her the apple for breakfast.” The queen handed it over. “She’ll die after three bites.
“What if she doesn’t like apples?” Sleepy asked.
“SHE-WILL-LIKE-IT!” the queen yelled.
“Alright. We’ll give her the apple for breakfast,” Happy said.
The queen nodded, so he slammed the door in her face. “What’s up with all the psychos?” Grumpy asked.
“I don’t know,” said Happy, “But I’ve never heard a plan that’s so sure to fail.”
“I can still hear you!”, the queen snapped from outside.
**
Despite the dwarfs’ skepticism, the queen’s plan worked out perfectly. Snow White woke up and when she saw the shiny red apple on her plate, she squealed. “Of course, the nicest apple should go to the fairest of them all,” she said happily and merrily took two bites. “It tastes kind of funny though,” she said, throwing it to the floor, not taking the third bite.
“Oh, screw this!” said Grumpy. He had been hiding a
I really like it! It made me laugh, and it's sort of twisted in a really cool way. After reading it I changed my pic, just for you.
What do you think of this excerpt of my story?
This is a small excerpt of my story, tell me what you think. I prefer harsh criticism

P.S. the (i) means the words are in italics and are thoughts.

(i)"Hey!"(i)

"What" I asked shaken from my stupor.

"Um, Sapphire, we didn't say anything," said Bethany a confused look on her face.

(i)"It's me idiot."(i)

Realizing it was Alexis, I quickly excuse myself to go to the bathroom. After Rick has checked it and I'm given the okay, Tony and him post themselves outside the bathroom. Heading to the sink I pause to look in the mirror to check my make- up.

"What do you want?" I say irritably, pissed off that she had make me look like a fool..... again. I knew she did it on purpose just to anger me , but I could never help rising to the bait.

(i)"I've got school tomorrow and its already 9 o'clock."(i) she grumbled as I checked my make-up in the mirror.

"So, like I care," " I almost never get to hang out with my friends. I'm not leaving yet."

(i)"Fine, then I'll just keep nattering away in your head. I wonder what your posse, sorry.. your 'friends' will think of you when they realize there's a whole other you inside your head."(i)

"You, wouldn't dare." I gasp, outraged, my hands falling to either side of the sink as I clench my fists in anger , strongly wishing I could choke the *****.

(i)"You bet I would. I've got a major test tomorrow, and I refuse to fail it just because you want to stay out till midnight with your friends."(i)

Letting out a frustrated groan, but knowing it was a losing battle, I check myself in the mirror one last time and head back to my friends, Rick and Tom at my back like large shadows. To let them know I was leaving .

After saying goodbye amid many protestations that it was too early to leave yet. I head out of the club, and head towards the black sedan that is my personal car. The loud thud of the music fading, as I fold my long legs into the car and close the door. Taking out my phone I check my schedule. The opening and closing of the door lets me know that Rick and Tony have now gotten in the car.

"Miss Sapphire, to where are we headed?" I hear Anthony, my driver ask.

"Head for Central Park." I say as I go through my weekly schedule, making notes here and there to ask my manager Fiona about.

Arriving at the famous park, I head straight to the public washrooms to change with Alexis. Tony and Rick doing their best to protect me from the sudden mob of fans, that recognized me. " Dammit, I should have worn a disguise."

"We'll have to do that next time." says Tony as he is suddenly pushed against me by a particularly devoted fan. "Well at least the press isn't here."

The slow progress to get to the bathroom, starts to wear on my nerves. I adjust the bag on my shoulder, my hands clenching around the strap. Being a celebrity can be tough sometimes, but the perks were so worth it. Finally arriving at the bathroom. I see that it's rather run down. The walls outside have so many words graffitied on them that you can't make out each individual word, and several of the windows are broken. Arriving at the door Tony opens the door and gently pushes me inside, shielding me with his body and quickly follows me inside. Tony and I leave poor Rick outside to keep the mob of fans at bay while Tony checks the bathroom. After making sure no one is in there. He head outside to help Rick with the mob.

Heading to an empty stall I reach up to remove the necklace that is my persona. After removing it and stowing it in the bag I always carry with me I feel the effect of the glamour falling away. My 5' 11" frame starts shrinking to a measly 5' 2". My long blonde hair that I'm famous for changes to longer ebony strands. Soon Adonia emerges. It always takes us a while to switch.
I'm torn between WTF and being very interested. I think your story has potential....but then again I don't know what the **** I just read. I don't really understand what it's about and I think your language is a bit awkward. It's vaguely ok, but I think you need to read it out loud. Something about the clarity, the sense of natural flow is off. Change the writing so that it seems more like your own voice. Also, what the hell is this story about?? Some of it seems a bit pretentious. Her "5'11 frame"?? The fact that she's a celebrity? You can make it work but you don't want to have your readers rolling your eyes do you? Get inside her head. Just because you may idolize the character doesn't mean her life is awesome. I see you doing that in your writing.

My personal opinion is that I want to have a character that I can A) relate to and believe in or B) want to get inside their head and follow them around their life. Even if you take option B, you still need to have a character that is relateable.
How do I help, i feel so helpless?
My mum has been with this guy Simon for 8 months, sure i don't like him that much but he is a great, funny guy who puts a smile on my mums face, I haven't seen for years (:
Well he also has 2 daughters Bree 6 and Ebony 3... Well they come and stay for a week every second week and yer they annoy the **** out of me but there ok guys. Cute and funny.
Well Casey (there mum) is filing for custody and Simon is completely depressed, she is so good she will win (even though she is a ***** to my mum).
I can't stand all this moping around, I use to be depressed and this aint helping my recovery. Please help me
maybe talk to ur mum about this. she might understand and help. everything happens for a reason and maybe helpin ore around the house, helpin cheer everyone up might help. the sooner the better. good luck and hope everything goes well for u.
take care of yaself

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